Young people essay
Feedback -
www - You make plenty of good points here and at times develop a strong, convincing argument
ebi - You are lacking detailed specific examples in places
- In general, your argument lacks depth/analysis. Twice you mention hegemony - a brilliant, relevant point - but do not go on to discuss it in detail.
- Time mangement - The essay stops abruptly
- Develop one of your paragraphs/ points on hegemony and re-write in detail
Learning response - Develop one of your paragraph/points on hegemony and re-write in detail
The newspapers even through their sales have declined through the years, they still have a massive impact on the the views of the UK residents. The riots were not all passed by negative stereotypes as for some left wing newspapers. This was the perfect way to show the audicnce the damage David Cameron has caused. The right wing newspaper the daily mail has always taken the side of the goverment, and dispises the actions in which the young people of London has taken. In one of their article 'it was just like a supermarket sweep', shows the seriousness of the theft in which the youths have caused. Also the imagines contrast to this negative representation of young black people as it shows white officers with black youths in every picture, which gives the negative representation and that white people have the huge authority.
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